in flight,
circling over the dust
that is kicked up by our feet.
running over stones and hay,
stumbling onwards,
as we stare above
into the redening sky.



2 comentarios:

Anónimo dijo...

Chayle, I like the spiral, and how the birds seem to be leaving trails of their own color mixed with the sky.

It feels very "wet paint".

Isabel Batteria dijo...

I really sense movement.